托福作文中常遇到的错误

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        托福作文大家都过不少参考书而且背诵了不少好段子，但还是有非常多的考生托福分数不理想，下面就来看看东莞托福培训的小编rain是如何评点托福写作的常见错误的。

一.句子不完好Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get sintos college. For example, my friend in high school.句子中没有需要主语、次要动词，其实它应是一个
从句。这是一个十分常见的毛病，修改的办法是将两个句子衔接起来。

二.介词过剩I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to
the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表现这种意思时此单词不克不及与介词连用。这种状况罕见于downtown，home
，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因此不克不及在它们后面添加介词。

三.书写难以识别信息不准确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不准确，或许让人听起来认为能够不准确(假如的确是准确的，该当说明
为什么如许，由于读者不以为是准确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不克不及相对地说每一件新器械多是从美国降生的。为保险起见，该当运用many或most。非英语单词Computers are
very helpful and advantageable.虽然看起来象个单词，其实不是，至多不是个英文单词。运用这个单词的另一种方式。

四.不要运用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got sintos bed. Get太不正式，意思也过于模糊，不合适用在正式的场所。应将get改为一个愈加详细的单词，如become,
receive, find, achieve,等等。

五.构造不屈行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当运用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时分，该当运用词性相反或统一类型的短语。
六.段落过长，不分段主语与动词分歧成绩She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面纷歧致。

七.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

八.句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得诙谐好笑。

九.关联词语反复出现Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不可以在该句的次要主语和次要动词前运用连词。

十.万万不要运用缩写在正式的写作中不要运用缩写方式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，该运用单词的完好方式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
上面这些就是东莞托福培训的小编rain给你大家总结的托福作文中常见十条错误，大家可以参照自己的情况看看自己犯了哪些错误，再对应的改进。最后东莞托福培训小编祝大家托福备考顺利！